After the Flood wins!

I discovered last night that I had been picked as the winning entry for Hour of Writes last week, with After the Flood.

Read my entry here (the one by Sirona)

This is my second win over at Hour of Writes, and in addition to being grateful for the prize money, it’s good to have another achievement to add to my writer’s CV. For a first time author trying to get seen in a sea of people in the same position, anything that can give you a bit of an edge is valuable.

Hour of Writes is, currently, a fairly small competition. There are usually around 25 entries a week, but they are of a fantastic standard. I don’t think I’ve read an entry yet that wasn’t worthy of being published, and the poetry blows me away. To write a polished piece of literature in an hour is an accomplishment, but to get the layers of meaning and sheer artistry of poetry done in an hour is amazing.

I also heard back from them about the inappropriate marking, which has been dealt with, and more excitingly – the 2015 winners Annual is ready! It’s being posted today and should be with me by Christmas.

Buy your copy here.

Alfie Slider in the Chicken House

No, this isn’t the latest episode in the Alfie Slider series; it’s just my way of telling you all that I’ve submitted the latest draft of the manuscript to the Times/Chicken House Children’s Fiction Competition.

I received my in-depth consultancy report from Cornerstones Literary Agency in October, which I’ll blog about in more depth at some point, but was very encouraged. There were some changes needed, so I did those and then read through the revised story to see how I liked it. I love it! It has all the charm of the original, but with more depth and shine.

Getting a novel redrafted and line edited to the best of my ability in about a month has been hard work, the last few days I’ve spent so much time in Alfie’s world that I wasn’t quite sure what was real at times! Last night I went to the post office and sent the manuscript on its way, infused with good wishes from friends.

Competitions are always a long shot, especially big and well known ones like the Times/Chicken House but if you don’t enter? You stand no chance. I know there is a tremendous amount of writing talent out there, striving to get published and whilst I may have moments of doubt about myself I never stop believing in Alfie. Everyone who has read the story so far has been so enthusiastic, it’s like magic. Maybe someone at Chicken House will fall under the spell?

In any event, Alfie Slider vs the Shape Shifter is going on the back burner for a few weeks. I’ll work on Alfie 2, or maybe an adult novella until January when I’m going to be seeking representation.

Look out 2016, Alfie Slider is coming to get you 🙂

Short List

Happy News! I’ve just found out that my flash fiction story, In Memoriam, was shortlisted for the InkTears Flash Fiction competition earlier this month. The list was announced on the 3rd of November but I think I must have missed the email, but I’m glad I did as I needed that little bit of a boost this morning to encourage me on.

In Memoriam is not a typical piece of work for me, it explores the subject of losing someone very close and how we go on to become living memorials to them. I wasn’t even sure if it counted as flash fiction as there was no real story arc or character development but it looks like I have that question answered. There were almost a thousand entries, and mine was one of the 40 the judges liked most: That’s quite something.

Catching your breath, you turn and whisper ‘I love you’; the certainty of it remains with me even now. You did. We did. I have never seen a sight more beautiful than your face, haloed in golden light, hovering above me. (In Memoriam, Sarah Dixon)

 

Becoming a writer.

In January of this year, with my youngest settled at preschool, I finally had some time to do something for myself. Three mornings and one afternoon a week, I decided to sit down and try to write a book. It was a test; would I write? Could I write? Would I be any good?

By May I had a first draft of my first children’s novel: Alfie Slider vs the Shape Shifter. It’s been read by a few adults who have used words like ‘gripping’ and ‘page turner’, more than one has read it in one sitting. It’s also been read by some children, my target market, and they loved it too! The York Writers novelist support group have been really encouraging and supportive, and when I started sending the manuscript out in September I did it with high hopes.

Those hopes soon turned into misgivings as I got standard responses of ‘thanks for sending, we have to be very selective, your work isn’t quite what we’re looking for.’ I realised that something must be missing from the manuscript and hired Cornerstones Literary Consultancy to review the story for me.

Their response arrived in October; and it was basically positive. Yes, there were a few grammatical issues and bad habits that needed to be polished out but the basics of the story were there. Plot, pacing, characters – all great. So why wasn’t I ticking the boxes for the Agents?

Well, it turns out that in this financial climate, everyone is looking to minimise work and maximise profit. That means unless your work is perfect, and fits neatly into a marketing pigeon hole, it’s going to be a tough sell. Hard news to hear, but valuable to know.

I’m currently reworking the novel to tick a few more boxes, and am hoping to send it out again in the New Year. I believe in Alfie, and I’m sure the perfect Agent and Publisher are out there and that I will find them.

What I have come to realise though is that even if Alfie does get published, the chances of it making any kind of real money are slim. Even published authors are diversifying, either with school visits and workshops or offering their professional services via Literary Consultants. So, if I want to live the dream and earn a living from writing, I need to think with a business head on.

This week as I was talking this over with a friend, she turned my meanderings into a solid business idea. An exciting business idea. One that brings together my skills not just as a writer, but from previous experience. An idea that sits well with my ethics and principles. More than that, I can’t say at the moment but watch this space.

Interesting times! Life as a writer is never going to be routine, there will always be multiple projects and different stages to balance, and family life to fit in too. I’ve never been more exicted about, or ready for, the challenge.

Hello world…

Thank you for taking the time to visit my blog.

Although I’ve blogged on and off for a long time now, this is the first blog that I am dedicating to my writing.

Since September this year I am an (almost) full time writer, with about six glorious hours a day to put my dreamings down on paper.

I am currently editing my first children’s book, Alfie Slider vs the Shape Shifter. Aimed at children aged 8-11, it is a Sci Fi adventure about what happens when a normal boy finds something utterly amazing.

I am also a prolific writer of short stories and flash fiction, and a regular contributor to Hour of Writes.

I am studying Creative Writing part time with the University of York.

I look forward to sharing my thoughts on writing, and some of my work very soon.

 

Sarah